This week’s 100 Word Challenge is for both Caspian and Coniston.
The prompt this week is back to ‘normal’. It is:
…and then the noise stopped…
You have 100 words to add to these 5 making 105 in total. Make sure you use your most creative descriptions. Please visit other entries too so that we can support each other.
Post your responses below.
Tip: If you type your work on Microsoft Word first, you will be able to check spelling and amount of words easily.. Then COPY and PASTE your writing into the blog.
Mr Gill and Mr Crump cannot wait to see your entries!
As Zero walked through the peaceful rainforest, he started to hear a rattle coming from behind him. Suddenly, Zero felt something crawling on his right leg. All of a sudden, somebody leapt forwards and wacked the Rattlesnake of Zero’s leg. Then the noise stopped. To his surprise, he saw Stanley standing behind him he closed his eyes and opened them again but Stanley was still there. How had escaped, thought Zero to himself? At first, Zero thought that he was dreaming, but then when Stanley winked at him, he new that it was true.
Zero woke up. He was sweating. It was all a dream…
On a cold shivering day , a sweet little girl called Lola , who was 7 years old , loved doing snow angels. Jumping happily , Lola was making a gargantuan snowman when … the earth started rattling like a babies toy , it was a earth quake . Hiding scared, Lola hoped the earthquake had stopped ; it didn’t . Rapidly , Lola sprinted towards the climbing frame to hide ,however the earthquake headed towards her . Lola , heard a immense bang . Just then Santa Claus was standing with presents , and the noise stopped. Santa offered presents and said sorry for making so much noise and Lola was so happy she cried .
By Hana
Inreally like your story because it has lots of interesting openers but you coild try using more prounons like she or her.
Keep up the work Hana.
By: Guldame Caliskan
Rapidly the noise stopped squealing and screeching from the kitchen. With a deadly look of his face, he tip toed carefully and quietly down the wooden stairs. Bob, who is full of fear, was trying to be brave whilst picking up his slipper which was on the stairs with his right hand. Slowly approaching towards the kitchen door, He walked through the door. He looked. He gasped .Inside the moist kitchen Their was an adorable GOLDEN-BROWN Labrador scratching his sharp paws on his washing machine. Bob, who was relived to know what the sound was, ran over to pick up the puppy and huge it.
By Abbie!!!
The Arsenal versus Chelsea match started off with a Bang! Lots of the referee’s decisions were wrong. I started to remember the tale about the referee attacker. Everyone in the Arsenal crowd started to shout. All of a sudden Azpilicueta scored. I was celebrating until I saw the referee attacker! And then the lights switched off. . . Screams were heard from the Arsenal crowd. And then the noise stopped. The lights switched back on. It wasn’t terrorism, the referee attacker just changed the referee. The match resumed. No one really knew what happened. At the end Chelsea won, HOORAY!