Suspense Writing

Can you write a suspenseful/tense paragraph about the photograph below? Remember the unknown (something/someone)

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3 Responses to Suspense Writing

  1. mohaf says:

    The hole
    Boom CRASH WALLOP!
    What could it be? I followed where the noise was coming from
    Boom CRASH WALLOP!
    There it was again. What was it? I had to figure out what it was A.S.A.P. I crept in to the living room to see a disgraceful hole in the floor. Something dirty brown came out of it. it was …
    by fatma

  2. mbacj says:

    One strange evening, leon woke up to find a hole in the hall-way “where did this hole come from”. Leon thought to him self how would live in a massive hole like that exclamed leon walking to the laptop, Leon fell over…

  3. calig says:

    As walk up the last flight of stairs, I notice a small hole in the floor. Who or what was in there? What lived in there? How did the hole appear? Suddenly, I heard a squeaky voice… It sounded like a mice! Slowly, noiselessly, I backed up towards the dirty, webbed wall. I tried to run away, but was it too late. It was too late, I was looked in. As quick as a flash my eyes shut and when I opened them I noticed that something had changed. There was light in the room! How did that happen? Was it a miracle? A white muddy bone fell in front of me just inches away from touching my feet. Then I noticed a small smashed window on the wall… How was I going to get up there? What should I do? The glimpse of my eye caught the sight of a pile of brown, cracked boxes! I quickly ran to them and picked them all up one by one. It was a hard job. When I finally carried all the boxes in front of the window, I slowly stepped on the first block and then the second but when I heard the sound of the door creak open I jumped of and then……. Was it… was it, no it couldn’t be, what was I thinking?

    Suddenly I woke in my bed full of sweat… My evil twin brother was sitting next to me! He offered me a cup of water. What was in it? I pushed it away, just in case there was something inside…

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