Use your dialogue writing skills to write a converstation between these two characters.
Remember the features of dialogue:
“Help!” yelled the policeman as he ran from the burning building.
Also, new speaker/new line.
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“OI you come here!” dimarned the donkey
“GIVE ME SOME WATER ASAP”
“What” shouted the boy wilst throwing the bottle of water at him.
“Ouch what was dat for” cried the thirsty donkey
“Oh so nex time you see a donkey in need of some water your going to throw it at him you maniac man !!!!”
“Hey you your standing there shouting at some random donkey and your not evan surprized that he can talk” screamed the confuse girl.
Tiyana
Cheak your spelling
you are writting slang
By Hana Murtezi
“Sir, what is terribly wrong!” Said the suprised man. “My house has set on fire! HELP!” Screamed the shocked man while trying to put out the fire with his flip flop. The young man looked at his jug of water then looked at the fire. He had a great idea! He could poor the water onto the fire! The young man ran to the fire proudly then poored the warm water onto the flaming fire. BOOOOOF… went the fire as it went out slowly. “Thankyou, thankyou so so much young man. how can i repay you for what you have done!” Said the joyful lady while dancing on the hot rociky ground. “Well… there is one thing…”
Matthew ,
This is great writting.
By Hana Murtezi
” We are going to die a painful lonely death !” Roured the poor child sprinting to safety.
” Ok listen stay calm paniking will never help you to safety ,” Annouced the brave police men while helping other people.
“Ok ok tarzan your not the one who is a 5 year old petrified child mister !” Exclamied the fearful boy as he hid behind a barrel.
” Be quiet you cheaky boy can’t you see go get some water and try burning this fire out rather than acting like a wimp try to be useful and save that donkey !” Yelled the Policeman while tiping water over the fire .
” Ok ok keep your hair on like you have any .” Whispered the poor boy while tiping water over the fire .
By Hana Murtezi
“I’riy man what you up to?” asked mamurduke in a jamaican acsent
“I’m ok , what dose I,riy man mean and can i have some water” replied liona
“Alright man and sure why not” said mamaurduke in a polite voice
“OH NO! THE DONKEY GOT AWAY!” shriked liona
“Help!” yelled the police man as he ran from the burning building.
The donkey ran towards the burning building
“STOP!” bellowed liona
luckly mamarduke chucked the warter on the building
Fatma ,
Check your work carefully
By Hana Murtezi
*demand
Fatma, the conversation is great. However, don’t forget about capital letters for names.
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Mr Crump
“I am so hot man, can you find me some water?” asked Deeja as he licked his dry lips with his un moistuered tongue.
“Why should I do it. I am a human being to you know.” replied the selfish man called Bob.
“I don’t see why you both don’t just get up off your lazy butts and get the water for youselfs!” the brown, ugly donkey bellowed whilst letting of a stinky gas from it’s mouth.
“Your breath is so bad donkey it’s making my eyes burn. I mean it, I’ve now gone blind because of you. Thanks a lot you uselss animal.” shouted Deeja as he kicked a couple of plants out of his way.
“Hang on a minute, you just kicked a plant and plants can only grow if their is water, you are a genious! Well, you are begining to become a geniouys, but the only real genious here is me! LOL!” Bob said as he followed a trail of plants with his beady eyes.
“Will you be able to walk all that way considering your, er, well, your weight?” the donkey asked whilst blinking away all the tears of laughter he had just created.
“Thats rude, you sh…”
“sister!” the poor boy yelled in need.
“What!”the unuseful girl roared back “keep up or we are going to be late!”
“Hold this its to heavy,” the boy wined while struggeling to stand up straight.
“I dont see why i havet to do everything aroud here?”” we are carrying an equal amount of wait come on!” the girld bellowed with fustration .
” ok then i will make a deal if u take the walter i will take the dokey,” the boy replyed whilst dummping the barrel of water on the dusty dry floor.
“ok”
“You, come here you give my some water!” demanded the selfish donkey, which belonged to the farmer that lived down green lake.
“No! Don’t be so greedy,” “Ask politely next time, you manerless thing,” shouted the next door neighbour.
Suddenly, the donkey started to chase the brainless farmer all around the path and chased him up to the lake which was flooding with sparkling, mouth-watering water.
“Ahhhhh,”exclaimed the petrified farmer, as he fell into the lake…
As he came out of the water, the heavy donkey catapulted into the lake and made a huge that the farmer floated away.
“Oh my gosh Is the building on fire?” asked Charles
“Oh run the building is going up in flames” screamed Aaron
” Who or what did this to the main temple?”
“Oi you come here and gimme some beer” demanded the angry Koala
“what in the name of god is that”
“its a talking koala” said the confused boy