We read Geography Lesson. It’s a poem about an inspirational teacher.
We decided to write poems about people who inspire us. We tried to include repetition, figurative language and description of our inspirational people.
Please comment below our poems by saying something positive, asking a question and then making a suggestion.
I shall become an experienced footballer,
Like Cristiano Ronaldo,
But when he say’s “NO!”
I shall not whale.
And I shall carry on achieving
What I want to be.
Because I know one day
I shall succeed.
I will start from a seed
Into a blue flower,
like the players from Chelsea FC
And I shall succeed.
By: Armaan
I like the similes but I think you can put more similes…
Well done Armaan, good work!
I love this banter !
I like it because your following your dreams
by Basilio
I like your description
why do you like Cristiano Ronaldo so much?
I think you should write real Madrid instead of Chelsea because you like Cristiano Ronaldo.
I like that you are determined.
why do you like Ronaldo not Messi.
instead of says put screamed
Life is boring
That im sure
I like doing new things
Just like you
Everyday I like to play ps4
But I also like to go to the park
Actively playing football
Just like you
I’d like to rob a bank
Bit that’s not cool
Instead of that
I like following the rules
Just like you
I really like your poem, but you wrote bit when you wrote “bit that’s not cool” I think its has to be But. To add on, you forgot your commas and full stop.
Good work!!
But you forgot to write your name.
Age is not a problem,
People who say age is a problem,
Are the problem,
Age is not a problem,
Age is not a problem,
Peter Cech is 33,
With a great career like ford with top range cars,
Age is not a problem.
lolo
Hi Robert Blair,
I just wanted to pop in and say it’s great to see you all writing poetry on subjects that inspire you. I like the way you are using poetic techniques for effect too.
I hope you enjoy the second poem “The Visitor”.
We can lose and they can win,
The best football, the rest are in the bin,
Messi is a shaking machine,
He is left footed, just like me and is the best,
He is as strong as John Cena, forget the rest,
He can win green,red and orange,
He is MAD when he blows your storage,
He is as cool as his handsomeness,
If you see Messi ,well, he is better than Sturridge,
He loves his fans and his team,
He plays for Barcelona FC and wins every game,
BUT…doesn’t run out of steam,
He is rich and famous and has 92 pace,
He is as fast as Ronaldo and Neymar if they had a chance to race,
Messi can be found anywhere in Spain,
He is a finisher…LEVEL UP AGAIN,
Messi is the best and has inspired me,
I will try my best, never give up on me,
I can do it, so can you, just like me,
I LOVE MESSI,MY HERO MESSI…
You forgot full stops.
MARIO BROS
Little Mario and his flying Boat,
Wearing a red hat and blue jeans.
His friend Luigi wearing green hat
With an L on it.
They catch the money,
Jumping jumping
Like a frog.
By Jaidon.
I like yours,Jaidon.
I like the way your layout.
Who do you like the most?
Could you add a smile.
I like the use of your repetition
why do you like Mario and Luigi?
may I suggest you to use a simile.
I like your poem because you like MARIO
by basilio
Ariana Grande
Acts and sings like a beautiful swan,
In children TV Channels acting amazingly like she was born like that,
She would dye her hair Red just to be in a funny show.
Amazing Red Hair in shows being awkward,
Pretty brown and blonde hair normally,
Slightly curled at the bottom of her fresh, healthy hair.
Those cute dogs with lots of spots,
Beauty products in England,
Even if she is in America,
How does she make you feel?
She makes happy,
She helps me out,
Ariana isn’t rude,
Like some people.
Beautiful sparkling eyes in the sun,
Soon I will be like Ari,
Would I have a nickname like her?
Nicknames all around us.
Would do anything for her fans,
I would be like her,
In my dreams,
I’m inspired.
I like it but you need more repetition…
In fashion you measure,
some people wear it for pleasure,
Are you happy,
that my fashion is snappy,
Wear it like you mean it,
but please don’t lick it,
if you do we will throw you in the pit,
and its not a happy one,
because your gone,
come buy it,
or fly – out,
Be careful you,
because I got my eyes on you,
chant it out-loud,
or stare to the clouds,
I’m not a rebel,
but I am a pebble,
soft as fabric,
and your name is shabric,
Do fashion, like me,
or take a rest, like me,
or show-off, like me,
Luckily, I don’t need to shave,
I would rather be in a grave.
I like the rhymes.
thanks
I like your rhyme cause it makes good sense
And when you said Are you who do you mean?
I love your poem its really funny. Just put full stops If you like
In fashion you measure
Some people wear it for pleasure
Wear it like you mean it
But please don’t steal it
I was expired
Now I’m inspired
She has smooth black hair,
It just gives me a flair,
My fashion is awesome ,
But not to gruesome,
She helped me like a nurse ,
When I was in a curse,
I’m happy ,
That my fashion is snappy,
Fabric, fur, silk,
As soft as milk,
that’s a great poem rakeb I love your rhymes
why do you like fashion designers so much?
I suggest you add a metaphor or a simile.
She helps me like a person with no confident,
My fears has drifted away like I am when I am tried,
NICKI MINAJ
Her hair is as long and smooth like a duvet,
She has a confident, bubbly personality.
She helps me to sing in front of my friends,
To do singing and dance classes,
I was unable now I am fresh and new like I have finished my shower.
I think you need to write more information
I like your simile
what do you mean by you feel fresh out of a shower?
thats amazing tyffany I love it
why do you like nicki minaj so much?
I suggest a few rhymes
Life is boring
That I’m sure
I like doing new things
Just like you
Ever day I like play ps4
But I also like going to the park,
Actively playing football
just like you
I’d like to rob a bank
But that’s not cool
Instead of that I like following the rules
just like you.
I love my poem beacause I made It like a rap
loving sister
She is a sister,
Always there when she wants be.
Scared, frightened,
She is also loving when she want’s to be.
Her personality inspires me,
I dream to be a loving sister like her.
Long shiny, auburn hair,
Just like I want mine to be.
She stands tall,
And bellows out,
How we should be,
Scared frightened ,
Also loving when she wants to be.
Not often, confiding in me,
Her personality inspires me.
I like your repetition
NEYMAR JR
Just like me
He a five star skiller
Just like me
He got incredible 95 pace
Just like me
He can take super free kicks
Just like me
He got a slick haircut
Just like me
He likes Messi
Just like me
He got an angel for a wife
Just like me
He where’s cool glasses
Just like me
He got white football boots, like a new rubber
Just like me
He plays for an asome
Just like me
just like me, in my dreams
I LIKE YOURS.
Family
They gave us life,
Generation after generation,
They rule the nation and,
They are my inspiration.
We are seeds,
To grow to flowers,
They turn to weed,
They are my inspiration.
We make them sad,
We make them proud,
We make the angry
But we are their inspiration.
They love us,
We love them,
They would die for you and me,
That’s why are inspirational.
Imagine people without families,
Who loves them?
Who do they love?
Who is their inspiration?
Rio and Luke
please read this i hope you enjoy
I shall become a footballer like Cristiano Ronaldo
I shall not cry when he says no
I shall carry on what I wont to be
I shall one day succeed
I will start into a seed to a red flower like the people from arsenal F.C
I will be fast as a Bugatti noble
I will be strong as a bull
I will one day sctdseed
THE BEST MUM EVER
Mum is the one who has given birth,
The one who works like a dream,
The one who has gone through a lot of pain,
Who has suffered every day until you were born,
And still we take her for granted,
Imagine all the kids who don’t have a mother,
How much they suffer every day of their lives,
their pain is none that we have ever felt,
She has gone through so much and that is what is extremely inspiring,
She makes me feel warm and safe inside,
she helps you when you’re stuck,
She consoles you when you are upset,
And most importantly she is your mother,
So you should admire everything she has done for you,
I LOVE YOU MUM.
Pansy’s are purple,
Penelope’s are pink,
Snow drop’s are white,
Rose’s are red,
Violet’s are blue,
You can be any one of these magical things,
But beware beware if you don’t do your share you will be a which tree,
They are like a love poison with their magic spells,
They can catch you in a second so stay alert,
But Cat is the one who drives my fears away,
I was expired, Now I’m inspired.
Skai Jackson
Acts like a wonderful sunflower
Sings,Like an angel in the shiny sun
and the beautiful blue sky
maybe that’s why her name is sky
like the shiny sky.
Makes me feel like she shines
floats like a lovely soft
cloud in the sky
maybe that’s why her name is sky.
I live everyone poem