I do lots of thinking in my study sat at my PC. This morning as I was thinking what prompt to set you, a hot air balloon floated across the roof tops opposite. Here in Bristol, we are known for our balloon flying so I have used that as inspiration for this week’s prompt:
…looking down, I was surprised to see…
Really get your imaginations working!
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Looking down, I was surprised to see the beautiful grassland and all the wonderful creatures. As I was in the air balloon, I felt just like a huge bird gliding through the sky! Buildings trees also added to the marvellous view. Everybody was so small, that they looked like ants and the cars looked like humans. Floating where a bird actually flies is an amazing feeling because you can also see from birds eye view. As I flew over a river, I saw the cute ducks; swans, a few meters away I saw a group of children chasing the swans.
its very good
I like the words gliding it fits in with the sentence Guldane
Being scared of heights filled Toni’s mind.
“Can we get down please? I am freaking out!” Toni squeaked.
“Come on dude, face your fears. We only just got on.” replied James. Toni stood up slowly and looking down, he was surprised to see lots of people were waving at him.
“You know what James? This isn’t so bad. I don’t need to be afraid of dumb heights. If this crashes we’ll have parachutes to keep us safe. Right?” Chuckled Toni whilst grinning.
“Err…No,” Mumbled James whilst blushing, “Don’t worry we won’t cra-OH NO a big plane is coming our way!”
I love your story.
Its very origanal and its a great work and I cant wait for the second part of this superb story Daniel .
welldone it geat
Looking down I was surprised to see a bright colourful hot air balloon, slowly, softly lifting up into the blue vibrant sky. In my bedroom, I saw the warm vibrant colours of the hot air balloon, dazzling through my window, I was mesmerised! The balloon made me remember a time I was on a warm sandy beach. I saw a beautiful rainbow appear in the sky, glittering like gleaming fairy dust, and when the reflection beamed into my eyes I slowly smiled with happiness. As the balloon floated up I saw the reflection of my kind hearted grandfather, smiling back.
by Abbie
I reall y like your story.
Hi abbie, it’s Jas. i ,love your story so much!
I like the way you used mesmerised in your work it sounds great Abbie.
Fantastic work Abbie.
One humid glittery day , I skipped to the enjoyable theme park to have a go on amusing rides. Jumping wildly , I arrived at the immense theme park ,and bought one pink luscious candyfloss. After a minute, I leaped to the rollercoaster so I would have lots of fun. However when I got off ,I saw colossal bouncy castle , that was as sizeable as Jupiter , was for rides. Swiftly, I darted towards the bouncy castle . when I got there I jumped like a kangaroo. Just then , I woke up and it was all a dream looking down , I was surprised to see there was no theme park .
By Hana Murtezi
I really like your story Hana. It has a lot of things that i like!
I love your writing.
Keep it up. Fab!
Looking down, i was surprised to see the very top of Big Ben’s spire rapidly coming closer to the old basket which i was standing in.
I tried to control the big Hot air balloon, whilst controlling my emotions.
I started to think what i should do ?
but then it came to me i realised i needed to take some weight off of the hot balloon, so looking around i found my picnic basket and threw it over.
But i was still when finally i … woke up and found my self in comfortable bed looking at my air balloon wallpaper!
BY Tiyana. Begum;0
Hi tiyana, its Jas. I really like your story. It’s interesting!
Good work Tiyana.
I like how you you used the ellipses In your work Tiyana
I like the way that Tiyanas was all a dream and her hot air balloon wallpaper.
I like the way that Daniel has used his speech correctly.
I love it.
Guldane
All these storys are awsome!
A £50 pound note. When I found the money my eyes widely open . I exclaimed “I never never never ever found that much money. ” My friend felt jealous. Later on that day, I took the money home so I can save it for my pocket money. And I saved £300 pound, which was enough to buy a cool thing, for example, Xbox Kinect. By Amira. This is the hundred word challenge.
Slowly the sky got darker, I limped with one worthy leg into the old rickety graveyard, when I saw my sister, but she wasn’t acting normal she was hovering towards me, so I ran desperately trying to find help! Whilst dashing helplessly, I found a coke on the floor but you see I haven’t had a drink in ages so when my sister wasn’t looking I disappeared into a bush, rapidly I started guzzling, I loved the cool taste of the refreshing fluid running down my arid dry throat. Thinking hardly about my sister suddenly a hand grabbed my foot.
by @BB!£ (ABBIE) LOL! 🙂